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环境保护责任

Environmental Protection Responsibility
讨论型大作文
🏷️ 讨论型📋 ID: 168📝 词数 278

📝 题目

Some people think that individuals can make a significant contribution to solving environmental problems, while others believe that only governments and large companies can make a real difference. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

🤖 作文

Environmental degradation has become a pressing global concern, sparking debate over whether individual efforts or institutional actions from governments and large corporations hold the key to addressing these crises. Both perspectives hold merit, though I believe long-term environmental solutions rely on synergy between all stakeholders.

On one hand, individual actions form the foundational layer of broader environmental change. Small daily choices, when aggregated across millions of people, produce measurable impacts: opting for public transport over private cars cuts household carbon footprints, reducing urban air pollution; sorting waste for recycling lowers the volume of refuse sent to landfills and reduces resource extraction. For example, the widespread individual uptake of reusable bags and bottles in many European countries has cut single-use plastic consumption by over 60% in the past decade, a shift that began with grassroots public action before formal policy was introduced.

On the other hand, governments and large corporations possess the regulatory power and capital to drive systemic change that individuals cannot deliver. National governments can enforce strict carbon emission limits, invest in large-scale renewable energy infrastructure such as wind farms and solar grids, and implement penalties for polluting entities. Large corporations, responsible for the majority of global industrial emissions, can redesign production processes to cut waste and adopt low-carbon technologies at scale. For instance, China’s national ban on importing non-recyclable waste in 2018 forced global recycling systems to restructure overnight, a change no individual or group of individuals could have triggered.

In my view, neither group can solve environmental problems alone. Governments set binding rules and public infrastructure, corporations invest in sustainable innovation, and individual consumer choices and civic pressure push both parties to prioritise environmental protection.

结构拆解

审题定位
本题属于雅思写作Task 2的“双边讨论+个人观点”类题型,核心话题为环境保护的责任主体,写作要求为:分别论证“个人能产生重大环保作用”、“只有政府和大企业能带来实质改变”两种观点,最后给出自身立场,需要结合逻辑与相关例子论证。
开头段
改写题目引入争议,清晰给出“各方需协同作用”的核心立场,避免模糊表态;
主体第一段
论证“个人作用”的合理性,核心逻辑是“微小行为规模化后产生可量化的环保效果”,搭配欧洲普及 reusable 用品减少塑料污染的生活化实例,符合题目“结合自身认知/经验”的要求;
主体第二段
论证“政府和大企业作用”的合理性,核心逻辑是“公权力管制、大规模资本投入是系统性变革的必要条件,个人无法实现”,搭配中国“洋垃圾”禁令推动全球回收体系改革的实例,贴合现实且有说服力;
结尾段
重申个人立场,明确三方并非互斥关系,而是互相推动的协同关系,不额外添加新论点,保证论述闭环。
避免绝对化表述
不片面否定某一方的作用,呼应“discuss both views”的要求,不会出现“任务回应”维度的扣分;
词汇与语法
混合使用简单句与复杂句(定语从句、状语从句),搭配环境类话题核心词汇(如carbon footprint、renewable infrastructure、single-use plastic等),符合7分以上作文的词汇语法多样性要求。
评分标准契合
从任务回应(完整回应双边观点+个人立场,有对应例子支撑)、连贯与衔接(段落逻辑清晰,连接词使用自然)、词汇丰富度、语法多样性四个雅思写作评分维度均符合高分要求。