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成功与运气

Luck And Success
观点型大作文
🏷️ 观点型📋 ID: 007📝 词数 277

📝 题目

Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

🤖 作文

It is sometimes argued that luck is the primary determinant of whether people can attain their life goals. I completely disagree with this view, as I believe consistent effort and clear planning are far more essential to success.

Admittedly, random fortunate events can occasionally create opportunities. For example, a person might accidentally meet an industry expert at a social event and land a dream job, or a small business owner might benefit from an unexpected viral trend that boosts sales. However, such lucky breaks rarely lead to sustained success if the person lacks the competence to capitalise on them. A candidate who gets a job interview by chance will fail to get the position if they have not developed relevant skills, and a business that goes viral will quickly collapse if it cannot deliver quality products or services.

In reality, most life achievements are the direct result of deliberate preparation and persistence. Luck is unpredictable and cannot be relied on, but setting realistic targets, working steadily towards them, and learning from failures puts people in a position to seize opportunities when they arise. For instance, the Chinese athlete Su Bingtian did not break the Asian 100-metre record by luck: he spent years adjusting his running form, following strict training schedules, and refining his technique, which eventually allowed him to perform to his full potential at the Tokyo Olympics. Countless other successful people, from scientists to entrepreneurs, attribute their accomplishments to years of hard work rather than random chance.

In conclusion, while luck may play a minor, occasional role in bringing opportunities, it is dedicated effort and careful preparation that are the main factors behind achieving life goals.

结构拆解

审题定位
本题为雅思大作文典型的“观点类(同意/不同意)”题型,核心讨论“人生目标的实现是否主要和运气相关”,要求给出明确立场、论证理由并结合相关例子。
立场确立
选择“完全不同意”的清晰立场,符合雅思写作立场明确的评分要求,核心论点为“努力与规划才是实现目标的核心要素,运气仅为次要的辅助因素”。
开头段
改写题目,直接给出明确立场,开门见山点明核心观点。
主体第一段
先做让步,承认运气确实可能偶尔带来机遇,让论证更客观不片面;随即转折,指出如果没有对应的能力,运气带来的机会无法被把握,从逻辑上否定“运气是主要因素”的观点。
主体第二段
提出核心论点,说明长期的准备、坚持才是成功的核心,且举出苏炳添的具体案例贴合“个人知识/经历”的题目的要求,论证具体有说服力,避免空泛说理。
结尾段
总结全文,重申立场,再次明确运气的次要作用和努力的核心地位,首尾呼应。
语言把控
使用雅思写作高频正式词汇(如determinant, attain, capitalise on, deliberate, persistent等),搭配多样的复合句结构,符合任务要求的所有评分维度(任务回应、连贯衔接、词汇丰富度、语法准确性)。