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国际合作的益处

International Cooperation Benefits
讨论型大作文
🏷️ 讨论型📋 ID: 166📝 词数 281

📝 题目

Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that businesses mainly benefit. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

🤖 作文

International collaboration has become a core feature of global development, and debate remains over whether its greatest advantage lies in environmental protection or commercial progress. In my view, while both domains gain substantially, environmental action delivers the most universal, long-term benefit, even as businesses also profit significantly from cross-border partnerships.

Those who argue environmental protection is the primary beneficiary make a valid point. Many pressing ecological issues, from global warming to transboundary air and ocean pollution, do not respect national borders, so no single country can address them alone. The 2015 Paris Agreement, for instance, united nearly 200 nations to set shared carbon reduction targets, enabling coordinated investment in renewable energy and shared scientific research that individual states could not achieve independently. Without this international alignment, efforts to curb greenhouse gas emissions and preserve endangered ecosystems would be far less effective.

On the other hand, advocates of the business benefit highlight clear commercial gains. International cooperation removes trade barriers, harmonises regulatory standards, and allows firms to access new markets, cheaper supply chains, and global talent pools. For example, free trade agreements such as the Regional Comprehensive Economic Partnership (RCEP) have cut tariffs across 15 Asia-Pacific nations, boosting export volumes for small and large enterprises alike, driving innovation through cross-border competition and collaboration.

In my opinion, while commercial benefits are real, they are often unevenly distributed, favouring large corporations and wealthier nations more than ordinary communities. In contrast, successful environmental cooperation protects shared planetary resources that support all people and all economies. Without a stable climate and healthy ecosystems, no commercial activity can be sustained long term. For this reason, environmental protection represents the most important and fundamental benefit of international cooperation.

结构拆解

题型判断与结构规划
这是雅思写作Task 2的“讨论双方观点+给出自己观点”类双边讨论题,需要严格完成三个核心任务:①论证“国际合作主要利好环保”的合理性;②论证“国际合作主要利好商业”的合理性;③给出个人立场并解释。全文采用标准四段结构:引入段改写题目+亮明观点、主体段1论证环保视角、主体段2论证商业视角、结尾段总结并明确个人立场,符合雅思评分标准的任务回应要求。

语言与扣题

引入段
首先改写题目核心争议,直接给出观点:双方都有合理性,但环保是更核心、更普世的长期受益方,提前回应题目“main benefit”的核心限定。
主体段1(环保观点)
首先点明环境问题“无国界”的本质——气候变暖、跨境污染等问题无法靠单一国家解决,对应“必须国际合作”的逻辑;接着举《巴黎协定》的具体实例,说明近200国协同减碳、共享可再生能源技术的实际成果,论证环保是国际合作的核心受益领域,例子具体贴合论点,符合“结合相关知识/经验”的要求。
主体段2(商业观点)
先点明商业受益的核心逻辑:国际合作消除贸易壁垒、统一标准、帮助企业获得新市场、供应链和人才;接着举RCEP(区域全面经济伙伴关系协定)的实例,说明关税减免如何帮助亚太地区大小企业提升出口、促进创新,充分论证该观点的合理性,避免片面否定。
结尾段(个人观点)
首先承认商业收益的真实性,但指出其局限性:收益分配不均,更偏向大企业和富裕国家;而环保合作保护的是所有人类、所有经济活动的共同基础,没有健康的生态环境,商业活动也无法长期持续,从而论证环保是国际合作最根本、最核心的收益,立场清晰有说服力。

结构拆解(续 2)

语言与表达
全文用词正式学术,句式混合简单句、复合句、非谓语结构、定语从句,符合雅思写作7分以上的语法多样性要求;每部分都紧扣题目核心。

评分契合(2)

任务回应
完整覆盖双方观点讨论,个人立场清晰,有具体例证支撑,切题度高;
连贯与衔接
段落间逻辑连接自然,使用"On the other hand""For instance""In contrast""For this reason"等衔接词,行文流畅;
词汇丰富度
使用"transboundary""harmonises""alignment""unevenly distributed"等话题相关精准词汇,没有重复冗余;
语法多样性
混合使用各类从句、分词结构、被动语态,语法错误率极低,符合高分写作要求。